Since we weren't able to get together today I thought I'd share two concepts I had for the postcard. Please let me know if you like them or any part of them, maybe we can collaborate our ideas.
I like the second one best. The overlapping of shapes similar to mine is nice and I agree that that font for 'render' is stronger than the light text I had. I have updated mine as well so I'll post those. However, I think the text on the bottom left is too congested and all lower case seems kind of sloppy to me. I was thinking we could meet tomorrow after class since we couldn't on Tuedsay.
I like the second one best. The overlapping of shapes similar to mine is nice and I agree that that font for 'render' is stronger than the light text I had. I have updated mine as well so I'll post those. However, I think the text on the bottom left is too congested and all lower case seems kind of sloppy to me. I was thinking we could meet tomorrow after class since we couldn't on Tuedsay.
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